Sunday, November 17, 2013

tender abstractions...


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  1. Happiness, Warmth and Passion sprayed liberally through the language of colors. One could easily mistake it for Sanjay Leela Bhansali’s backdrop. When life is full of hope, the surroundings get more colorful in azure and mellowed in warmth of times to come, in a wish of something more meaningful to add virtues to already a salubrious zenith.
    The branches of thoughts with uninhibited passion meander upwards towards the hope, getting glazed, charmed and livelier with every moment. These thoughts cover the canvass of life with scintillating effect, making the pleasures felt with every step, swaying gently in zephyr of trust, belief and expectations of good times ahead. They encompass the soul tenderly with a bevy of incandescent little nuggets of cheerful ecosystems that look to grow and cover the enormity of universe with ideas- unlimited by time, unbounded by conventions and uninterrupted by external disturbances.
    Every bit of canvas glows in happiness, is coagulated in sweetness of desires and has the temerity to venture into the world unknown where time and destiny merge in one, where thoughts converge in thoughtlessness and where the very reason of life become abstractions of tenderness.

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    2. Thanks Amit!
      I look forward to your interpretation as they bring out innate perspective of the art piece. You have unerringly selected words for what is communicated through colors and forms.

      This painting is an abstraction of a gazal… which provides a backdrop of emotions, and in the forefront allows you to fathom and transcend your feelings. It was created for someone who resonates within you and your feelings are vehemently unwavering…

      I will leave it at that… and let the magical mystery be demystified by connoisseurs who can read through emotions ☺:D:D

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  2. i think its good! and if u dont put it up on a wall... i will be honored to put it up on mine

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    1. It will be a pleasure to gift you this art piece… :D:D:D

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  3. Uski siskiyon ka asar kuch aisa tha
    Ki raat pareshan si meri ankhon mein jaagti rahi
    Chandani katra, katra pighal kar barasti rahi
    Chand taktaki lagaye mujhe dekhta raha,
    Mano puchta ho jaise….
    Kyon is kadar tune use ruswa kiya….

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    1. My humble take:

      रात इतनी भी स्याह नहीं कि,
      सिर्फ तन्हाईओं में ही बीत जाए,
      चांदनी इतना भी नहीं गरज़ के बरसती,
      जो उजाले की तपिश में ना सिमट जाए..
      रौशन हो गुलिस्तां जब सूरज से,
      बयान नहीं हो पता वो अफसाना फलक से...
      उमड़ के निकलें जब इरादे ज़हन से,
      रोक नहीं पाएं उन्हें सरहदें पलट के..
      आ उड़ें फिर साथ साथ छोड़ दे बादलों को नीचे,
      लिखें किस्से कुछ नए, और रुस्वाई रह जाए पीछे..

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    2. Inspiring...

      my thoughts...

      Tere iradon ka haath jyun thamein
      Hadein aap gum ho jaati hain
      Tere aagosh ki tapish se
      Doobti nabz ko ek saans mil jaati hai
      Khafa na ho jo tu kabhi
      Meri gulistaan ke phool bas teri nazar hain
      Aur tere mere safar ki manzil,
      En sitaron se bhi pare hai

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    3. bahut khoob...

      ek ye bhi...

      तेरा अक्स जो सितारों में नज़र आये तो क्या हो,
      दिल कि जुबां खामोशी बयान करे तो क्या हो..
      उस इब्तेदा का क्या कहें, जो इन्तेहाँ से परे हो.
      उन एहसासों को क्या नाम दूं जो खुश्बू से भरे हों..
      नब्ज़ को तो उतर जाना है, ख़लाओं में गुम कर....
      उस तपिश को क्या कहें जो न रह पाये थम कर..
      मंज़िल ना मिले, जब आगाज़ हो सफ़र का साथ तेरे,
      गुलिस्तां ही बुनते रहे तेरी तस्लीम में अलफ़ाज़ मेरे...

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    4. Chaand kuch yeh keh raha tha ...

      Aye naadaaan, ruswaiyon main bhi meri deewanagi hai,
      varna chaandani bhi chaand se kabhi juda hoti hai.
      mere noor se jhilmilati teri yeh palkein,
      aadhi band aankhon par yeh roshandaan si lagti hai.

      Chaandani kitna hi pighal le, pighal ke baras le,
      mera ansh hai usme, uske daaman main sada ke liye.
      Haath jo thama hai tera, ab to apni ek hi dagar hai.
      Us kaali raat main bhi chupe hue chaand ka basar hai.

      Nice creation Neha, but more than your painting, I liked the poetry above -
      "रात इतनी भी स्याह नहीं कि,
      सिर्फ तन्हाईओं में ही बीत जाए
      ... ...
      ... ..."

      Deepak

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    5. Hi Deepak...real nice.

      few more lines on Amit's poem

      Tere alfazon ko piroye
      bandishein mere hotho pe sajane lagi hai
      teri khwahishon ki khushboo
      madhoshi si sanson mein ghulne lagi hai
      teri bebaki ka asar ho raha hai shayad
      teri oor uthte kadmon mein
      meri beparwahi badhne lagi hai
      Ebaadat us khuda ka kar, ae aadib
      ki mein sajda kar loon uska
      jisne mujhe tujh si nemat di hai.....


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    6. just a thought...

      रंग कहाँ फ़बता है शफ़क़ में धुले आसमान में,
      इरादों को बहने दो बेख़ौफ़, छोड़ कर किनारों को.
      बेख़ुदी अर्ज़ करती है, मदहोशी के आलम में,
      साये में ढक लें, आफ़ताब के ख़ारज़ारों को.
      ख़ुदा के सामने तो बन्दे ही सजदे करते हैं,
      बना दें रश्क से अपने ज़ाहिद, काफ़िराना नामसारों को...

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  5. Very soothing. u r very talented, keep it up!

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