Saturday, July 6, 2013

Bus ek lamhe ka jhagda tha...


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  1. There is something magical about moments: whether they are embedded in joyous syrup or profound sadness, soaked in amity or enmity or effervescent with flashes of solace or an unfounded argument. The tree of life sheds off the moments in utter deluge. With passage of time, every moment finds its destiny, turning from living green to the memorable pink in the silhouette of experience. Some of the moments are charmed, few are enchanting and only a chosen few haunt. With the magnanimity of the seamless sky, they flow and ebb; creating a compendium of memories in every living soul. No two moments are same. They capture various hues of human soul and thoughts; embed an entire array of life. They are by nature cosmos of life in the minuscule form; with every moment mirroring the essence of life similar to the Tree which begets its quaint charms.

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    1. Amit you are right! It is about moments and experience. There is more to this, but its best to hear the audience perspective... The intricacies of the masterpiece is not shown on the blog... :)

      For this one, my inspiration is this poem by Gulzar -

      bas ek lamahe ka jhagda tha....

      dar-o-deevaar par aise chhanaake se giree aavaaj

      jaise kaanch girata hai
 har ek shay me gee,
      udatee huee, jalatee huee kirachiyaa

      najar me, baat me, lahaje me
soch aur saans ke andar


      Cheers :D

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  2. Us ek lamhe main pattiyan jhad hi gayi
    Giri jahan, woh zameen bhi uski thi,
    aur woh saaya bhi uska tha
    Bus ek lamhe ka jhagda tha

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    1. Deepak, its so wonderful to see you write again :D:D:D
      When do i get to see more of it... we are all waiting :D

      contd...

      lahoo hona tha ek rishte ka, so vo ho gaya us din

      usee aavaaj ke tukade utha kar
      farsh se us shab
kisee ne kaat lee nabje

      na kee aavaaj tak kuchh bhee

      ki koee jaag na jae

      bas ek lamahe ka zagada tha…
      - Gulzar

      Write more...
      Neha

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  4. Bas ek lamhein ka jhagda
    Aur ek umra ki Judaai
    Ye sath kaisa tha
    Ki hum dilon ke fasale sinchte the..
    Tere agosh ki garmi mein bhi
    Barf si ek nabz dhoondhte the
    Jin palon se jindagi sajee thi,
    Har lamha use yun hi kuredte the..
    Kyun toot kar bhi tujhse,
    Tere sath ka wo ehsaas
    Har raat meri ankhon mein ubharta hai...

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    1. tere saath ka woh ehsaas, har raat ankhon mein ubharta hai...!

      The feeling described by you is poignant... that of missing and fading flavors but the taste still lingers on and on and on... :)

      It reminds me of your poem written in the blue notebook :D

      Cheers :D:D:D

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